Two ladies with lace

So, this is the third one.I can see flaws again in the rendering.the features , particularly the eyes seem heavy.anyway carry on. I like the lace, I like the jewellry, I like the composition. What else could I do.........well, I could take out more colour, so just do the face in a kind of sepia and put colour in the hair.......use jewellry for the hair.......paint butterflies on....carry on.

This painting is calm, pretty, vintagey, gentle, reflective.Carry on.